Posted by Enar on May 06, 2011 at 19:55:08 from (98.244.241.123):
In Reply to: english paper help posted by andy stockmaster on May 05, 2011 at 17:23:21:
It appears that the Shift Key on your computer is not working. You have not capitalized any of your sentences in your original post. Two words have letters missing. There should be two spaces between sentences. And some of your sentences are not sentences. English as in language, subject, or teacher is always capitalized.
So, now you see why some of us are saying you must proofread your work. It would be preferable to have someone else read it over when done. They'll find errors that you won't.
As far as the paper goes, a tractor restoration is a good subject. Your English teacher is not. As a former teacher, I would not be too happy with that topic, which I would assume was a "smart guy" as a joke!
Sit down with some blank paper and write a heading on each sheet, Introduction, Body 1, Body 2, etc, conclusion. Now start putting some ideas on each one. Just you random thoughts and just stick them where you think they might go. After that, go to bed. Next day, look them over. Make the changes that will most likely leap out at you from the pages. Go to bed again.
Next day, rewrite the pages in paragraph form using the first pages for reference. Go to bed again.
Next night, read it over, make final corrections, put it in order, and have someone else read it. Now, yeah, go to bed again.
If there are no changes, turn it in for an "A". And if you are a typical teenager, this report was due several days ago and you don't have time to do all that I said. But you can do it in your mind as you create it. Turn this one in for a B-. And get some sleep for goodness sakes!! Don't be spending all your time on this forum!! LOL!!
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